I REALLY like how this page came out. Especially the third cell with Dominic lowering the sword. Not sure if he's relieved or about to puke he's been so amped up since all this started.
I'm super happy to be to this point of the story too, because Cherlize has had a huge impact on how things are playing out, but it's all been behind the scenes to this point
The last bit of dialogue is something of an add on - it's IN the story, but not quite in the same way. I think I like this better.
Dominic's words to Cherlize could be interpretted a couple different ways too. I will leave it up to readers to make conjecture!
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OH! Cherlize is older than Dominic by a few years. But what's that when they're both over 300 years old eh?
I REALLY like how this page came out. Especially the third cell with Dominic lowering the sword. Not sure if he's relieved or about to puke he's been so amped up since all this started.
I'm super happy to be to this point of the story too, because Cherlize has had a huge impact on how things are playing out, but it's all been behind the scenes to this point
The last bit of dialogue is something of an add on - it's IN the story, but not quite in the same way. I think I like this better.
Dominic's words to Cherlize could be interpretted a couple different ways too. I will leave it up to readers to make conjecture! .
OH! Cherlize is older than Dominic by a few years. But what's that when they're both over 300 years old eh?